My poem vs AI generated poem

This blog is part of my classroom activity assigned by our teacher. I compose a poem using metaphor brought by me and another poem was generated by meta AI.

Both poems are provided below.

Task -1:- compose a free verse love poem using unique metaphor.

1 .Self  generated Poem:-

Title:- love like an ocean 

Love, like an ocean, 

does not run out of water.

Just as his feelings for him, do not run not,

It always overflows, like the flow of the ocean.

Disappointed when you love.

 

AI generated poem:-

Love, like an ocean, vast and wide,

Endless depths, where hearts can reside.

It ebbs and flows, with every tide,

Constantly changing, yet always inside.

Its waves crash strong, on the shores of soul,

Sweeping away fears, making us whole,

In its dark depths, treasures are found,

And pearls of wisdom, in its silence profound.

Like the ocean 's roar, love's voice is loud,

A soothing melody, that echoes proud.

It calms the storms, and weathered seas,

And in its calmness, serenity releases.

Love like an ocean, infinite and free,

A boundless force, that's meant to be.

So let us dive,in to its depths so true,

And let love's ocean, forever shine through.

"   God 's love is like an Ocean ;

You can see its beginning but not its end."

(This take the image AI meta tools.)